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Thursday 29 May 2014

the survivors that made it 2

Ah I cant breath I need help find the flouting bout. Now the bout is is going down lets get to the top because only the cracked side went down we are going to die oh no lets go the water is coming that's it i'm out jump he lands on the iceberg why there's a plank on the water it's floating i'm gonna jump. and that was the last time some one saw him.        

1 comment:

  1. Hello Ryan,

    Good story! I found it interesting. A man who decided to get to top, that must've been hard! Hey, could you tell me which side sunk first? Was it the hull, the starboard, the port, or the hold? Anyway, nice work!

    See my latest animation: http://pesiisas.blogspot.co.nz/2014/06/my-first-advertisment.html

    Sincerely,
    Iisa

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