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Wednesday 13 August 2014

War Poetry

I am learning to write a diamond poem with adjectives, ing-words and noun.


War
scary, terrifying   
shooting, killing, taking    
bombs, bullets, dogs, death
working, wanting, liking  
life taking  

Battle
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  1. Unknown14 August 2014 at 09:36

    You capture the idea of war well. Take a look at line 6, you need 2 adjectives. You have written one adverbial phrase that has two words in it. Try to think of two separate adjective words next time.

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